Please tell me you tied that extension ladder to the tree when you were doing the WFP of the top exterior. Please think safety over money. You can’t make any money from a hospital bed.
Video looks good, the music is a bit detracting though. Please remember that I used to teach post-production, so I am offering the same critiques and advice I would to one of my students. Just trying to nudge you to get better, not in any way putting down your effort. It sounds like you had to loop a section a few times and then let it play through at the end. The drums at 0:20 and 0:30 have a tempo drop that gabs my attention away from your images. You want your music to subtlety support your images and not pull your attention away. Do an online search for royalty-free mp3s and you can get something that will fill under that without having to loop. Additionally, youtube has a royalty free music library if you load your video into their “studio” page and then you can keep editing. I like the intro graphics and audio clip. I think it is the right amount of engaging. What did you use for that?